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Globalisation: local shops vs large chains

Question

Globalisation has led to the growth of large international retail chains, often at the expense of small, local shops. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Model essay (estimated band 7.0 · 275 words)

Globalisation has transformed retail in many countries, enabling large chains to expand rapidly. I partly agree that this process has harmed local shops, though I believe the situation is more nuanced: big retailers bring clear benefits, but their rise also poses serious threats to community economies and diversity.

On the positive side, large chains often provide lower prices and a wider choice of goods. Their scale creates buying power and efficient supply chains, which can translate into lower living costs for consumers. For many households on tight budgets, being able to buy everyday items affordably is a real advantage. In addition, national or international retailers can deliver consistent standards and convenience, which many shoppers value.

However, the growth of chains frequently undercuts small local businesses. For example, in the fictional town of Riverside several family-run bakeries and hardware stores have closed because they cannot compete on price or breadth of stock. As a result small shops have fewer customers. This decline erodes local character and reduces competition, which in the long term may leave communities dependent on a handful of corporations. Local suppliers and artisans also lose important outlets for their products.

I believe the negative effects can be mitigated. Local shops can specialise—offering niche products, personalised service or online sales—to remain competitive. At the same time, municipal authorities can introduce support schemes or planning rules to protect retail diversity, such as grants for start-ups or restrictions on the number of large outlets in sensitive areas.

In conclusion, I agree to a considerable extent that globalisation has disadvantaged many small shops, but with thoughtful policies and adaptation by local businesses the harms are not inevitable.

Band commentary

Task Response
The essay addresses the prompt clearly and gives a balanced position: "I partly agree that this process has harmed local shops". It develops relevant examples (Riverside) and offers solutions, fulfilling the task by explaining both harms and benefits.
Coherence & Cohesion
The response is logically organised with clear paragraphs (introduction, benefits, harms, mitigation, conclusion). Linking is effective: "On the positive side", "However", "In conclusion". One quoted sentence shows sequencing: "As a result small shops have fewer customers." — cohesion is good, though a missing comma after introductory phrase slightly disrupts flow.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is varied and appropriate: phrases like "buying power", "supply chains", "undercuts small local businesses" and "retail diversity" demonstrate range. The essay uses precise terms such as "niche products" and "municipal authorities" to convey nuanced ideas.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
The essay uses complex structures well: "While large chains bring benefits such as lower prices, their scale often allows them to undercut local firms and squeeze suppliers...". Grammar is generally accurate, with only minor slips (for example punctuation in "As a result small shops have fewer customers.").

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