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Funding Space Exploration vs Earthly Problems

Question

Some people believe that governments should spend more money on space exploration, while others argue that funds would be better used to solve problems on Earth, such as healthcare and poverty. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.

Model essay (estimated band 7.0 · 273 words)

The debate over whether governments should prioritise spending on space exploration or on urgent social needs is a familiar one. I largely disagree with the idea that space programmes should take precedence over healthcare, education and poverty reduction. While space research has clear benefits, government budgets should be directed first to immediate human needs, with space activities maintained at a sustainable level.

First, many countries face pressing social problems that affect citizens’ basic wellbeing. Diverting substantial funds to space missions would reduce resources available for hospitals, schools and social security, and this would have direct human costs. As I argue above, when people lack access to essential medical care, investments in distant missions can feel like a misplacement of priorities.

That said, it is important to recognise that space exploration delivers long-term advantages. Satellites provide communications, weather forecasting and environmental monitoring essential to agriculture and disaster relief. Furthermore, technological spin-offs from space research often find applications in medicine and industry. Space programmes has yielded materials and imaging techniques that are now used to diagnose disease and improve manufacturing.

A balanced approach is therefore preferable. Governments should ensure adequate funding for social services while maintaining scientific programmes at a level that encourages innovation. In addition, public–private partnerships can shift some of the financial burden to commercial actors without removing state oversight. This avoids the false dichotomy that money for space necessarily comes at the expense of human welfare.

In conclusion, while I accept the value of space exploration, I disagree that it should be given priority over urgent social spending. A measured strategy that protects basic services and fosters research is the wisest course.

Band commentary

Task Response
The essay addresses the task directly and takes a clear position: "I largely disagree with the idea that space programmes should take precedence..." It evaluates both sides and offers a clear recommendation to prioritise social needs while maintaining research, fulfilling the requirement to "To what extent do you agree or disagree?" The response could be strengthened with one concrete example of a country or statistic, but it covers relevant arguments and concludes appropriately.
Coherence & Cohesion
The essay is logically organised with clear paragraphs and linking phrases such as "First," "That said," and "In conclusion," which guide the reader. For example: "That said, it is important to recognise that space exploration delivers long-term advantages." Transitions are effective and progression of ideas is smooth, though a stronger topic sentence in the third paragraph could make the cohesion slightly tighter.
Lexical Resource
Vocabulary is appropriate and varied, with useful collocations like "urgent social needs," "technological spin-offs" and "public–private partnerships." The phrase "false dichotomy" shows precision in meaning. Word choice is generally natural and accurate, supporting the arguments without repetition.
Grammatical Range & Accuracy
The essay demonstrates a range of complex structures, for instance: "Governments should ensure adequate funding for social services while maintaining scientific programmes at a level that encourages innovation." There are minor errors that do not impede communication: e.g. the sentence "Space programmes has yielded materials and imaging techniques..." has a subject-verb agreement error. Overall grammar is strong with only occasional slips.

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