Building Upwards vs Outwards in Cities
Question
Some cities address population growth by building upwards (high-rise residential and commercial towers) while others expand outwards into suburbs and new developments. Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of building upwards rather than outwards, and give your opinion.
Write at least 250 words. You should spend about 40 minutes on this task.
Model essay (estimated band 7.0 · 277 words)
Faced with rising populations, city planners must choose between building upwards or allowing horizontal expansion. Both strategies have merits, but I believe that, on balance, building upwards is generally preferable if it is accompanied by careful planning and investment in services.
One clear advantage of vertical growth is the preservation of surrounding land. Constructing high-rise housing and mixed-use towers reduces urban sprawl and preserves surrounding farmland and natural habitats. As a result, cities can protect biodiversity and limit the loss of agricultural land. In addition, concentrating people in taller buildings makes public transport and utilities more efficient. High population densities along major routes support frequent bus and rail services, which lowers per-capita energy use and traffic congestion compared with dispersed suburbs.
However, building upwards has disadvantages that must be managed. High-rise blocks, for example, can feel crowded and may offer smaller private living spaces, which some residents find stressful. This approach have proven successful in several fast-growing cities, but it can create social problems such as isolation if communal facilities and green spaces are neglected. Moreover, towers are expensive to construct and maintain, and older buildings require costly retrofits to meet modern safety and energy standards.
In my view, the best solution is a mixed approach: encourage higher density around transit hubs while protecting green belts and promoting lower-density development in carefully planned satellite towns. With strict building regulations and investment in services — schools, parks and local shops — vertical expansion can deliver sustainable, vibrant urban life without the negative side-effects of uncontrolled sprawl.
In conclusion, building upwards offers clear environmental and infrastructural benefits, but only when combined with policies that address social and maintenance challenges.
Band commentary
- Task Response
- The essay addresses the task well, discussing both advantages and disadvantages and giving a clear opinion: "I believe that, on balance, building upwards is generally preferable". The main points (land preservation, transport efficiency, social drawbacks, cost) are relevant and supported, though some arguments (for example, the claim that towers reduce per-capita energy use) could be developed with more specific evidence.
- Coherence & Cohesion
- Ideas are organised logically into clear paragraphs with effective linking phrases such as "One clear advantage" and "However". The conclusion summarises the position coherently. There is occasional unevenness in paragraph balance — the disadvantages paragraph packs several points into a short space — but overall sequencing is clear and easy to follow. Quoted linking: "However, building upwards has disadvantages that must be managed."
- Lexical Resource
- The essay uses a good range of vocabulary appropriate to the topic: phrases like "urban sprawl", "mixed-use towers", and "transit hubs" demonstrate lexical variety. Quoted example: "preserves surrounding farmland and natural habitats". Word choice is generally precise, though a few phrases could be more formal or specific for higher bands (for example, expanding on what "social problems" entails).
- Grammatical Range & Accuracy
- There is a mix of complex and simple sentence structures, and most sentences are error-free. However, there is a noticeable grammar slip: "This approach have proven successful" (should be "has proven"). Overall accuracy is good enough for band 7, but occasional agreement and minor phrasing issues prevent a higher score.
Estimated band scores for practice only. Not affiliated with or endorsed by IELTS, the British Council, IDP or Cambridge.